| View previous topic :: View next topic |
| Author |
Message |
hiroy Divine Avatar of Bishopia


Joined: 30 Sep 2007 Posts: 541
|
Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 4:48 am Post subject: Taking in ideas for short stories: Egoboo Comic related |
|
|
I need some light-hearted stories I can do as comics for Egoboo. I don't want anything too complicated, or complex and i can be about anything within the world of Egoboo(made-up, or ingame).
If you don't want to risk spoiling anyone, you can PM me.
Please note, I'm only going to use my whatever inspires me, so don't be ashamed if I don't use yours or any. I would not accept any adult humor either. _________________
..... What? |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
Agent of Dread Second Member (Moderator)


Joined: 23 Sep 2007 Age: 11 Posts: 3342 Location: Google it
|
Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 7:22 am Post subject: |
|
|
First box:
A Wizard and a Paladin are facing each other.
Wizard: "*Paladin name here*, I'm giving you the Mana Sword."
Second box:
Paladin: "Wow, thanks!"
Third box:
Paladin: "Yoohoo!" Wizard: Ohwowwhatnow?
Fourth box:
Wizard: Sorry, I have a sudden memory loss.
Fifth box:
Paladin: Oh. You were giving me the Mana Sword.
Wizard: Pfft. Yeah right, like I'd ever give YOU the Mana sword.
I hid it for those who don't want spoilers. _________________
[My dA]|[Egoboo]|[SoulFu]
What the hell? No one told me there were LAZERS there!
Hey, Jimmy, what's the answer to number two? |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
hiroy Divine Avatar of Bishopia


Joined: 30 Sep 2007 Posts: 541
|
Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 5:44 pm Post subject: |
|
|
Working on that one now _________________
..... What? |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
Chainsaw Lumberjack


Joined: 20 Oct 2007 Age: 15 Posts: 1342 Location: Israel
|
Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:04 pm Post subject: |
|
|
Here's one, Try visualising it as you read:
A trio of adventurers, a Soldier, a Healer and a Rogue are heading down a corridor, the soldier is injured and he and the healer stop to treat his injuries.
Meanwhile the rogue goes to the next room for some scouting and plundering, He is carrying the fire bow.
Several minutes later, the soldier and the healer hear a girly scream, and the rogue is seen running back to their side.
Healer: "What happened?"
Rogue: "Cobols, about a dozen, I tried taking them down, but they were too close. One was so close, I could see the fire in his eye!"
Soldier: "You mean eyes, right?"
Then in the last panel, you see an angry cobol desperately trying to take out the flaming arrow stuck in his eye. _________________ Chainsaw's Cell [Last update: 08/05/08]
 |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
Agent of Dread Second Member (Moderator)


Joined: 23 Sep 2007 Age: 11 Posts: 3342 Location: Google it
|
Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 8:31 pm Post subject: |
|
|
 _________________
[My dA]|[Egoboo]|[SoulFu]
What the hell? No one told me there were LAZERS there!
Hey, Jimmy, what's the answer to number two? |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
hiroy Divine Avatar of Bishopia


Joined: 30 Sep 2007 Posts: 541
|
Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 10:18 pm Post subject: |
|
|
Lol. I'll keep that one in mind for the upcoming week.
I'm done with AoD's comic. I wonder where to post it.... _________________
..... What? |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
PurpleSquerkle Supreme Cookiemancer


Joined: 28 Oct 2007 Age: 17 Posts: 2798 Location: Midwestern US
|
Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 3:27 am Post subject: |
|
|
ooh, are you still doing that whole school newspaper thing or whatever?
But they'd have to be things non-Egoboo players would understand, too, probably.... _________________
+ PurpleSquerkle
--My website--
Latest update= 4/29/08; Finally, an update!
|
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
Agent of Dread Second Member (Moderator)


Joined: 23 Sep 2007 Age: 11 Posts: 3342 Location: Google it
|
Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 9:51 am Post subject: |
|
|
| hiroy wrote: | | I'm done with AoD's comic. I wonder where to post it.... |
Post it in General; Egoboo Comic or something.
Here's another one:
First Frame:
Rogue throws a knife/Whizzes past Wizard.
Second Frame:
Wizard throws the knife back.
Third Frame:
Another knife whizzes past.
Fourth Frame:
Wizard: Gah! Throws it back.
Fifth Frame:
Another knife/Wizard looking REALLY pissed.
Sixth frame:
A fireball flames straight through the Rogue's head, with shouts from the Wizard.
Hidden it again. _________________
[My dA]|[Egoboo]|[SoulFu]
What the hell? No one told me there were LAZERS there!
Hey, Jimmy, what's the answer to number two? |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
hiroy Divine Avatar of Bishopia


Joined: 30 Sep 2007 Posts: 541
|
Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 12:15 pm Post subject: |
|
|
| PurpleSquerkle wrote: | ooh, are you still doing that whole school newspaper thing or whatever?
But they'd have to be things non-Egoboo players would understand, too, probably.... |
I still work with the school newspaper, but not anything Egoboo related. I'm not really allowed to show my submission to them though.... _________________
..... What? |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
PurpleSquerkle Supreme Cookiemancer


Joined: 28 Oct 2007 Age: 17 Posts: 2798 Location: Midwestern US
|
Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 3:27 am Post subject: |
|
|
What do you mean? _________________
+ PurpleSquerkle
--My website--
Latest update= 4/29/08; Finally, an update!
|
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
Axel The Lord of Ducks


Joined: 25 Sep 2007 Age: 10 Posts: 1581 Location: Hyrule
|
Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 3:57 am Post subject: |
|
|
| Hiroy wrote: | | I still work with the school newspaper, but not anything Egoboo related. I'm not really allowed to show my submission to them though.... |
He means he still works on the school's newspaper but he isn't putting anything egoboo related in there.
OR
He means he works on the school newspaper and doesn't work on egoboo anymore. _________________
Remotes I own:
Member Remote
PnP Remote
Junior Cookie Remote
Stupidity Remote |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
hiroy Divine Avatar of Bishopia


Joined: 30 Sep 2007 Posts: 541
|
Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 8:08 pm Post subject: |
|
|
first option.
Hmm... Chainsaw's idea is kinda tough to fit in one page. I'm still going to try shrinking it though... _________________
..... What? |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
PurpleSquerkle Supreme Cookiemancer


Joined: 28 Oct 2007 Age: 17 Posts: 2798 Location: Midwestern US
|
Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 9:03 pm Post subject: |
|
|
No, I mean, what do you mean by "I'm not allowed to show them my submissions"? _________________
+ PurpleSquerkle
--My website--
Latest update= 4/29/08; Finally, an update!
|
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
Chainsaw Lumberjack


Joined: 20 Oct 2007 Age: 15 Posts: 1342 Location: Israel
|
Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 7:24 am Post subject: |
|
|
It would be cool if when the Rogue's running ahead with the fire bow, it kinda zooms on it and says "The fire bow!Tm".  _________________ Chainsaw's Cell [Last update: 08/05/08]
 |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
hiroy Divine Avatar of Bishopia


Joined: 30 Sep 2007 Posts: 541
|
Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 4:29 pm Post subject: |
|
|
| PurpleSquerkle wrote: | | No, I mean, what do you mean by "I'm not allowed to show them my submissions"? |
I just thought about, and I don't think I even knew what I typed. Maybe I was about to say that they would not allow Egoboo into their newspaper...
@: Good idea Chainsaw. I should be about to come up with a better storyboard now. _________________
..... What? |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
|