...actually, she's better, but she still looks a little weird.
Me too, but mainly the eyelashes.
And Maxaxle, it's the exact same clothing. Exact same hairstyle. What is there to be different about? _________________ ...i c whut u did thar...
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Lash: Good. I like this one the best out of the three. It's simple and the design is awesome. With some folds in the clothes, lighting, better background, it could be a good image. Nice chracter though.
Kelia Ver 2: Not bad at all. The pose is simplified compared to the first one, and takes away personality but that's not bad. Lighting is missing... It could use some shadows from her hair going on her face, and a shadow under her chin. Could use more detail or texture(not necessary if it's cartoony) in the clothing....
Kelia Ver 1: Good idea for the pose, bad execution. Not horrible or anything, but the feet seem to go forward too much as if she is standing directly on the back of her heels. The hair is one-dimensional and does not match with the perspective of the face's direction. I know I may sound like a total geek for this(lolz), but the tail needs to move back a bit more and an indication she's using it to balance herself.
Overall, I see that your anatomy got better compared to your older artwork. If you are serious about improving, take a look at thes books that are avialbale for free viewing and download.
"Fun With A Pencil" is something I think you would like.
I hope I helped. _________________ Current Project
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Story: 15%
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Currently working on storyboards.
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If you look closely, there IS a slight gradient on the top/bottom legs, main head, and lower head.
@Hiroy- Thanks so much! But... folds in clothes... they aren't intended to come in to the picture, coz... this is like Sonic the Hedgehog fan-art, and it's just kinda meant to be simple. Other than that, thanks heaps! _________________ ...i c whut u did thar...
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They are from the actual Sonic game? Man... I been missing out.. Never played the games in like.. 5 years. _________________ Current Project
Egoboo: something [working title]
Preview
Story: 15%
Chapters planned: 2 out of many(it's huge)
Currently working on storyboards.
Motivation: 2% (it's huge)
No, I created my own characters.
A bit like www.gen8hedgehog.deviantart.com . _________________ ...i c whut u did thar...
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Joined: 06 Oct 2007 Age: 15 Posts: 2519 Location: San Diego
Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 12:01 am Post subject:
hiroy wrote:
Kelia Ver 1: Good idea for the pose, bad execution. Not horrible or anything, but the feet seem to go forward too much as if she is standing directly on the back of her heels. The hair is one-dimensional and does not match with the perspective of the face's direction. I know I may sound like a total geek for this(lolz), but the tail needs to move back a bit more and an indication she's using it to balance herself.
Joined: 28 Oct 2007 Age: 17 Posts: 4177 Location: Midwestern US
Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 3:12 am Post subject:
hiroy wrote:
They are from the actual Sonic game? Man... I been missing out.. Never played the games in like.. 5 years.
Nah. Sonic is probably the most fan-made-character-filled series than anything else. Because there's a lot of potential there, I guess.
Like, Mario? How do you come up with a Mario character? You don't, because nobody is Shigeru Miyamoto. Except Shigeru Miyamoto.
There are a ton of characters now though.
Next game should have only Sonic and Tails, and maybe Knuckles. Because they're the coolest ones, mostly.
Although E-101 Gamma is pretty cool (though he "died" at the end of Sonic Adventure, and hasn't appeared in a game since).
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