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 Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 4:48 am Post subject: Taking in ideas for short stories: Egoboo Comic related |
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I need some light-hearted stories I can do as comics for Egoboo. I don't want anything too complicated, or complex and i can be about anything within the world of Egoboo(made-up, or ingame).
If you don't want to risk spoiling anyone, you can PM me.
Please note, I'm only going to use my whatever inspires me, so don't be ashamed if I don't use yours or any. I would not accept any adult humor either.
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First box:
A Wizard and a Paladin are facing each other.
Wizard: "*Paladin name here*, I'm giving you the Mana Sword."
Second box:
Paladin: "Wow, thanks!"
Third box:
Paladin: "Yoohoo!" Wizard: Ohwowwhatnow?
Fourth box:
Wizard: Sorry, I have a sudden memory loss.
Fifth box:
Paladin: Oh. You were giving me the Mana Sword.
Wizard: Pfft. Yeah right, like I'd ever give YOU the Mana sword.
I hid it for those who don't want spoilers.
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hiroy
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Working on that one now
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Chainsaw
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Here's one, Try visualising it as you read:
A trio of adventurers, a Soldier, a Healer and a Rogue are heading down a corridor, the soldier is injured and he and the healer stop to treat his injuries.
Meanwhile the rogue goes to the next room for some scouting and plundering, He is carrying the fire bow.
Several minutes later, the soldier and the healer hear a girly scream, and the rogue is seen running back to their side.
Healer: "What happened?"
Rogue: "Cobols, about a dozen, I tried taking them down, but they were too close. One was so close, I could see the fire in his eye!"
Soldier: "You mean eyes, right?"
Then in the last panel, you see an angry cobol desperately trying to take out the flaming arrow stuck in his eye.
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hiroy
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Lol. I'll keep that one in mind for the upcoming week.
I'm done with AoD's comic. I wonder where to post it....
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ooh, are you still doing that whole school newspaper thing or whatever?
But they'd have to be things non-Egoboo players would understand, too, probably....
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| hiroy wrote: | | I'm done with AoD's comic. I wonder where to post it.... |
Post it in General; Egoboo Comic or something.
Here's another one:
First Frame:
Rogue throws a knife/Whizzes past Wizard.
Second Frame:
Wizard throws the knife back.
Third Frame:
Another knife whizzes past.
Fourth Frame:
Wizard: Gah! Throws it back.
Fifth Frame:
Another knife/Wizard looking REALLY pissed.
Sixth frame:
A fireball flames straight through the Rogue's head, with shouts from the Wizard.
Hidden it again.
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| PurpleSquerkle wrote: | ooh, are you still doing that whole school newspaper thing or whatever?
But they'd have to be things non-Egoboo players would understand, too, probably.... |
I still work with the school newspaper, but not anything Egoboo related. I'm not really allowed to show my submission to them though....
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What do you mean?
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| Hiroy wrote: | | I still work with the school newspaper, but not anything Egoboo related. I'm not really allowed to show my submission to them though.... |
He means he still works on the school's newspaper but he isn't putting anything egoboo related in there.
OR
He means he works on the school newspaper and doesn't work on egoboo anymore.
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first option.
Hmm... Chainsaw's idea is kinda tough to fit in one page. I'm still going to try shrinking it though...
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No, I mean, what do you mean by "I'm not allowed to show them my submissions"?
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hiroy
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| PurpleSquerkle wrote: | | No, I mean, what do you mean by "I'm not allowed to show them my submissions"? |
I just thought about, and I don't think I even knew what I typed. Maybe I was about to say that they would not allow Egoboo into their newspaper...
@: Good idea Chainsaw. I should be about to come up with a better storyboard now.
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